I will read and line-edit your query, synopsis (up to eight pages double spaced), and (up to) your first 50 pages. I will also give you additional feedback on characters, plot, pacing, pitch ideas, etc., to polish your submission package for querying or contesting. (I will also read your query and synopsis a second time for free.) One week turnaround.
Read and Respond
I will read and reply with a full report on your manuscript (or partial). This will include detailed feedback on characters, pacing, plot, what worked and didn't work, what's satisfying to the reader, etc. This will give you a blueprint for edits and help take your manuscript to the next level. Note: These are summary/overview notes and do not include in-line or chapter-by-chapter edits, however, I will reference specific chapters as needed. If there's something specific you need help on or want me to look for I can help you with that, too. There's a two week turnaround.
Under 40,000 words --
41,000-70,000 words --
71,000-100,000 words --
Over 100,000 -- email for availability
Full critiques are available, see the critique services tab for details.