I can help you take your manuscript to the next level. I offer a variety of services for YA, NA, or MG novel (all genres) as well as a variety of others--email me and we'll talk. Please email me at suzannelazear @ yahoo for a quote. I don't critique erotica, even Steamypunk, because I just don't have the expertise (but I can recommend people who do.)
Submission Package $50
I will read and line-edit your query, synopsis (up to eight pages double spaced), and (up to) your first three chapters. I will also give you additional feedback on characters, plot, pacing, pitch ideas, etc, to polish your submission package for querying or contesting. (I will also read your query and synopsis a second time for free.) One to two week turnaround.
Read and Respond
I will read and reply with a full report on your manuscript (or partial). This will include detailed feedback on characters, pacing, plot, what worked and didn't work, what's satisfying to the reader, etc. This will give you a blueprint for edits and help take your manuscript to the next level. Note: These are summary/overview notes and do not include in-line or chapter-by-chapter edits, however, I will reference specific chapters as needed. If there's something specific you need help on or want me to look for I can help you with that, too. There's generally a two to three week turnaround, though I can work with you.
Under 40,000 words -- email for rates, since it depends on length
40,000-70,000 words -- $100
71,000-100,000 words --$150
Over 100,000 -- $200+ (email for quote)
I do have a very limited amount of full critique spots with (generally) a four week turnaround, these include in-text and chapter by chapter notes. It does not include full copy editing, but if I catch something, I'll fix it. The cost starts at $1 per page, please email me for a quote.
I have an MG-age MG/Lower YA beta who is available. She and I work together to give you an in-depth critique of your MS. (Her words/thoughts, I'm there mostly to make sure the feedback addresses your specific needs and topics so that you get feedback that is useful to you, however, I may add "notes from mom" from time to time.) It's a more involved process, since we read the book out loud, and it takes a little longer (about 2 months for a standard length MG). Read & Respond rates start at $150, which goes to her summer camp fund, email me for details.